My Bedroom Draft2

My bedroom is on the second floor. It is a square.
When you walk in the door, you can see a window on the wall.
My bed is under the window on the right corner.
My desk is under the window next to the bed .
The closet next to the desk in front of door.
On the right of door is trashcan.
A bath is in front of the bed.
My bookcases are between the bed and bathroom

My embarrassing experience Draft 2

My embarrassing experience happened when I was nine years old.
Someday my older sister rode bicycle with me.
Then she rode to some corner.
Suddenly a motorcycle rushed out.
And then, my older sister do bumping stop so she stop her car.
After two minutes, I fall into a trash can!
This sound litle funny, but it was embarrassing for me.
Because people who passed by car looked me.
I felt my body sent out foul smell and some housefly around me.
This experience let me learn that no one is allowed to sit on the back seat when we ride bicycles.

My Bedroom Draft1

My bedroom is on the secend floor. It is a square.
When you walk in the door, you can see a window on the wall.
My bed is under the window on the right corner.
My desk is under the window next to the bed corner.
The closet next to the desk in front of door.
On the right of door is trashcan.
A bath is in front of the bed.
My bookcases is between the bed and bathroom.