My Bedroom Draft1
My bedroom is on the secend floor. It is a square.
When you walk in the door, you can see a window on the wall.
My bed is under the window on the right corner.
My desk is under the window next to the bed corner.
The closet next to the desk in front of door.
On the right of door is trashcan.
A bath is in front of the bed.
My bookcases is between the bed and bathroom.
posted by Amanda @ 7:24 PM
9 Comments:
*My desk is under the window next to the bed corner.*
You should change to *My desk is under the window next to the bed.*
"My bedroom is on the secend floor. "secend" change into"second".
"My bookcases is between the bed and bathroom." "is" should be "are".
"The closet next to the desk in front of door."
Should write "The closet *is* next to the desk in front of door."
"The closet next to the desk in front of door."
Should write "The closet *is* next to the desk in front of door."
"my bookcases is between the bed and bathroom." the "is" should change to "are".
"My desk is under the window next to the bed corner."should change to "My desk is under the window next to the bed.".
"The closet next to the desk in front of door" should change to the closet "is ".....
"On the right of door is trashcan."
You should plus "a" between "is" and "trashcan".
You have your own bathroom!
That's good!!
maybe you can use some conjunction to connect you sentence
You have bedroom in your room!
How nice!!
"My bookcases is between the bed and bathroom." "is" should change into "are" or "bookcases"should change into "bookcase"
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