Making decisions Draft-1
Growing up means making my own decisions. When I was a child, my parents always made my ideas. Because, they known what thing is good for me and how to do is better. But now, I wasn't a girl anymore, couldn't to be dependent of others. I could be independent. I was grown up and could made own decisions.
The hardest decision that I ever made was given up my leisure time. I think use my leisure time to do something is good for my grades and improvment my knowledge more and more. Because, It's never late to learn.
posted by Amanda @ 8:24 PM
2 Comments:
"Because, they known what thing is good for me and how to do is better." change into "Because they knew what is good for me and how to do is better." is better.
"do something is good for my grades and improvment my knowledge more and more"
maybe you should change into
"do something what is good for my grades and improve my knowledge more and more"
"Because, It's never late to learn."
maybe you can change into
"Because there was a saying: It's never late to learn."
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