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Wednesday, June 06, 2007

The computer Draft-1

Computers play a more and more important role in this civilization. The computer's function is very a lot. We can use it to make papers, listen to music, and get some we needed imformation.
Also, we can use it to chating with another people. Besides,we can use it to kown what thing was happened in our nation. The computer was influence in our life.

Computer was extensively to used in these days. It always helps us to do something was important on time. Let we don't be late on important meeting. And some teacher will use it to teach student online. Now,notbook become papular. Also, we can carry it on to go everywhere.

1 Comments:

Blogger Dora said...

"get some we needed imformation"--> change to "information".

"Also, we can use it to chating with another people."--> change to "chat".

"to kown what thing "--> should write "know".

"some teacher" --> teacher add a "s" is better.

"Now,notbook become papular. Also, we can carry it on to go everywhere." Write "Now, notebooks become more popular that we can also carry them on to go everywhere." is better.

7:53 PM  

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