Translation Draft-1
School's life Draft-1
I always busy in the school.
When I become a senior high school student, I am expect to enter a university.
And the unversity exam is keen compeition.
Therefore,I am forced to study night and day.
Every day, I am weighed down with schoolwork.
That is why I am always busy at home and school.
In addition, I am forced to give up my favorite extracurricular activites.
If only I can have a colorful school life.
Computer Draft-1
Computer is play an important role in our life.
It can help student hand in homework quickly,and help people sent imformation in time.
As long as you turn on the computer, you must fall in love with it.
Therefore, be sure to advice yourself, don't sit long time in front of computer.
More parents don't like their children depend on computer.
Aspecially, it is very weast time in BBS.
posted by Amanda @ 8:39 PM
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"unversity"=>"university"
"compeition"=>"competition"
"imformation"=>"information"
"activites"=>"activities"
"Aspecially"=>"Especially"
"weast"=>"waste"
"Computer is play an important role in our life." should change to "Computer plays an important role in our daily life."
"I am expect to enter a university." change to "I expect to enter a university." is better.
compeition → competition
*don't sit long time in front of computer.* should change to *don't sit in front of computer for a long time*
"I always busy in the school." should be "I am always busy in the school."
"university exam"should change to
"unviersity entrance exam"
The mistakes will taken by others.
It's good for you.
"Computer is play an important role in our life."change into "a computer plays an important role in our life."
"it is very weast time in BBS."change into "it waste your time on BBS."
"and help people sent imformation in time."
the word "sent" may change into "send"
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