Stay at home
Today's weather is hot. My mom just has a vacation.
So, my family start to clean the house.
The house has very many dusts.And we sweep hard.
Although, not to go where to play.
But, stay at home to clean the house also can whiling away the time.
Originally,the house has very many dust.
After everybody hard sweep become very clean and neat.
Although, didn't go where to play.
But, all family for a very long time poly one is a happy day,two.
posted by Amanda @ 9:10 AM
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Dust is uncountable.
"Although, not to go where to play.
But, stay at home to clean the house also can whiling away the time." can change into "Although we didn't go out to play and just styed at home to clean the house, we still whiled away the time."
*The house has very many dusts* should change to *The house has dust*.
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